Lightning-fast marketing audits that’ll uncover exactly what you need to fix to bring in more sales
“Shhhh, don’t tell anyone but I used a template to write my sales page. But um, it’s all guesswork and I have no idea if it will convert. So far: no bites.”
“I’m my own worst enemy when it comes to procrastinating on fixing this email copy. I’d love to snuggle up with a cup of tea and do literally anything else. Can you do it for me instead… in less than a day?”
“My quiz ain’t working like I hoped. Any chance you can work your magic to lift this lead magnet from so-so to super effective?”
“To say I’m embarrassed about my [website / emails / sales page] is an understatement. Can you help me optimise it for conversions…in my brand voice?”
Do you want to put your feet up while I optimise your copy?
You need Secret Sanctuary™.
Hi, I’m Melissa Payne.
Secret Sanctuary ™ is a serene, hand-crafted marketing audit experience, designed to make selling easy.
While you relax, I’ll review your quiz, email sequence, website, or sales page to:
- Unbury the ‘hook’ that will connect with your customer
- Make recommendations to optimise for conversions
- Bolster your calls to action so that people can’t resist clicking through
- Refine your messaging hierarchy (so you can be sure you’re leading with the right persuasive messages)
- Analyse your brand voice for consistency
- Eliminate jargon, confusion and long-windedness
- Make suggestions to improve the user experience (with feedback on design)
- Anything else that needs fine-tuning
With more than 10 years’ experience and 157+ hours of professional training, I know exactly what to look for in your marketing suite to create a superpowered audit.
So you can focus on what you love doing and sell with confidence.
Now you can enjoy a luxurious, elevated experience and feel confident that your copy is optimised for conversions and ready to go out into the world.
A deeper look into the audit process
Here’s how we’ll honour your rest through our Secret Sanctuary™ Audit.
The Calm Framework™
Let’s explore the steps we’ll take to craft your relaxing audit experience.
Apply for Secret Sanctuary™. I’ll ask you questions and start to gather the intel from you that I need to do my best work. If you’re successful, you’ll get booked into my calendar.
Analysis & strategy
Huzzah! Your Secret Sanctuary™ Day has arrived. I’ll get to work analysing your copy and making strategic recommendations to optimise your quiz, sales page, website or email sequence.
Let go & relax
Time to relax while I do all the work! You’ll receive thoughtful feedback and audit suggestions for your copy within two weeks with a Loom video walkthrough to explain the strategic choices.
Mind at ease
We’ll jump on a 30-minute Bonfire Chat to discuss the audit results, my recommendations, and answer your questions. You’re now ready to sell your offer with confidence!
What do I tackle in a marketing audit?
The choice is yours.
Perfect for people who want conversion-optimised copy, pronto.
Here’s what you’ll get within two weeks:
Any ONE of the following:
- Quiz Audit
- Sales Page Audit
- Website Audit
- Email Sequence Audit
The Audit includes:
- Audience research / message mining – because we need audience data to make strategic, informed decisions
- Comprehensive video review of your quiz, sales page, website or email sequence
- A Google Doc with copy recommendations and edits
- Key sections (such as headlines, calls to action buttons, and body copy) rewritten
- Recommendations for your quiz, sales page, website or email visuals
Pairs nicely with Brand Voice Cartography.
Excited to dive in?
Secret Sanctuary™ is by application only to make sure we’re the perfect fit.
I love working with kindred spirits — copywriters and introverted business women who care about selling with integrity.
Only four spots for Secret Sanctuary™ are available each month. Please book your Marketing Audit at least 2 weeks in advance.
Start the process (with a tiny form).
Fishing for answers to your Qs?
Can I pay in installments?
Sure can! My only ask is that all of the installments are paid before our time together.